Sentence starters

29.4.2019
we are learning about using a adverb start. An adverb start is where you use a adverb at the begging of a sentence.

adverbs: quickly, curiously, importantly, firstly, often, remarkably, similarly, significantly, surprisingly, readily, concerningly, interestingly, confusingly, consequently, shockingly, ironically.

Remarkably, Roman could see the logic in logan's decision, so he did not question it.
Confusingly, Decit told the truth.

we are learning about a preposition starters. preposition is a word that tells you the position of something

preposition words: in, against, before, between, over, behind, within, under, below, at, for, throughout, near, about.

throughout the mindscape, you could hear the yelp coming from the kitchen.
between the arguments, Logan stayed in his room while Roman watched disney.

the P,E,E,L Paragraph.

P-  point, state the point you want to make
eg: Throughout the novel 'Abomination' martha is bullied
E- evidence, support your point with 2-3 sentences
eg; an example of this is the incident with the girls throwing water into the stall soaking martha. when she came out of the stall they punched her in the stomach and called her a slut. this made martha feel angry and upset.
E- explain, link my evidence to my point with 2-3 sentences
eg: unsurprisingly this is a exaple of phyical bulling by students toward martha. there was a impalince of power between martha and her bullies because there was one of her and three of them.
L- link, link back to your argument or to the next paragraph

30.4.2019
The -ed start
starting a sentence with a word ending in -ed
eg:committed, undaunted, determined, forced, gifted, blighted, thrilled, delighted, blessed, overpowered, intimidated, slaughtered, respected, united, confronted, convicted.

Intimidated by the stare, Roman let Virgil stay in bed.
Undaunted by the storm Logan keep working.

The w start
starting a sentence with some of the w words
eg: who, whom, while, when, what, where, whereas, whilst.

While the cookies baked, Patton packed up the mess he made
When Decit showed up, everyone groaned.

full story/4 sentences

While Patton waited for others to wake up, he made breakfast. Determined to be in a good mood, he sang to drown out the voices in his head. eveneraly Roman woke up to the sound of disney drifting down the hall. After sitting there for a while, he got up after hearing a crash.

P,E,E,L paragraph on imagination

Using your imagination is a great idea. While using your imagination, you are exercising your mind. After awhile, you will be able to come up with ideas quickly and efficiently.

sentences things

I have 7 sentence card to do so here is my work

Wild words 
I have so many fragile eggs in my car. the road I must go on i the most outrageous road I have to dive. Lots of bumps and railroads, I feel like a milkshake being busiled about. I have to so cunning on where to go you could stick a tail on me and call me a weasel. As I bump along I think of all the times this as all been a prank, a trick, something to bamboozle me. Oh how I wish this is not that.

Red White and Blue Sentence
Mum said I could do one thing today, oh how that sucks. I want to do swimming, skating (on ice or on the path), got to mega air, go to the mall and go for a hike, how can I pick just one? oh Mum you are so mean!

Precise in Everything
At 3:30 precisely I am going to be at the mall waiting for you, please be on time. We will have $200 do buy whatever we want but you must be there. If not I will give it all to my sister, Lillyan, and we both know she will only by lollys/junk food. Rosanne please be there.

Power sentence 
Kate seemed to always be late. she never was on time. Lilly was outside at 6:00pm and they had meant to meet up at 5:30pm.

Explore the subject
Rose loved marshmallow fellows, a high sugar treat full of marshmellows, cookies and pretle, even though her Mum never made it due to the amount of sugar in it

The big word Challenge
Mum loved big word much to my disgust. How could you like a word with 5000 letters? her faverit word is Methamphetamine. Ugg and she thinks I should know 1) what it means and 2) how to spell it. Why mum, why? 

Only one simple sentence
Katie loved to bake. When she did she was happy. why? When she ended up eating the baked goods of giving them away she always saw happy grins everywhere. This made her happy.

Here are another 7

Semicolon sentence 
Jon was a great author; his books where getting read in houses everywhere. Hannah was one of the people reading his books; she loved them

Fact mania
Jana loved to read, in fact she has read 200 in the last 4 years! James has only read 20, in the same time frame

W-start
Who is that? Where are they going? Will we follow them? Who knows, we could do that, we could find out out, or we could sit here. We could sit and think, about who they are, where they are going, or wheather we should follow them. we will sit and think, thats what we will do.

Chapter 61 Abomination

this is another create task. I had to write the next chapter in the book Chapter 61. so Here it is. It is is scotts P.O.V

‘You’ve got post’ I had opened up my computer and got this.

Scott It's martha! Annette showed me how to use a computer! She's awesome, annette, so is mary.
The kid got a name, Jim. it's a lovely name don’t you think? I love it. He is starting to talk now. He can
say, mama, mary, marfa, antnette. He’s an amazing kid scott  I wish you could see him. I miss you scott
I really do. Part of me wishes I never left. But then I would still with mother and farther. I don’t know what
I would rather have, you or this. I’ll email soon scott I swear. Love M.

I stared. Martha has her own email now! We can still talk! I laughed. Just weeks ago I watched her leave,
zooming away in a old battered car, thinking that would be the last time I would see or hear from her. Now
I can talk to her and… maybe I could see her. Maybe I pluck up enough courage to tell her how I feel. I
replied

HI Martha. How are you. Where are you? Maybe if mary let's you, you could come back for a visit or
I could come. School is hard. Stamper keeps telling me and everyone that you left for a school for
disturbed kids. As if and to make it worse she keeps asking me if I’ll be joining you. AS IF! Anyway
I just smile to myself as I know where you actually went. Any way I need to go to school. Sad. anyway
yes I will be here when you email. I also miss you. Alot. but I guess it is better this way as you aren't
trapped in your parents rules. I don’t want to think what would have happened if you either didn't meet
me or tell me about Jim. Yes I like that name. Anyway see ya

Scott.

I walked down stairs and ran in to mum. “You look happy dear. Why's that?” she asked I smiled at her.
“I got a email from Martha! We can now keep touch.” Mum smiled too. “That's nice dear. Now run alone.
You’re going to be late. Again.” I ran down the steps and down the street. I was in a dase because of the
email and I didn’t realise what I was doing till I got to school with a big grin on my face. Stamper saw me
as soon as I stepped in to school. I just scowled at her and kept walking. She ran to keep up. “Snotty
what’s got you so happy? Finally convinced your parents to go to your girlfriend's school?” She
sniggered “Na not that” Simon said from behind me “he just is happy to get his butt kicked.” they
laughed at his lame joke. Well at least I have something to look forward to now. Martha.

hope you like it

Art

in art we have been making a painting of manga (anami) and pacifica. yay fun. this is how far I've got so far. yes I know it sucks. 

It is Roman (from sander sides) and virgil (also from sander sides). Virgil is hiding in a cave [because he's a monster thing] and roman come in and finds him. that's the manga part they are supposed to be manga. the shapes on the wall are supposed to be pasifika patterns. 

now the boring part 

1. concepts are the initial design. you normally do a lot of concepts to get your final design. they are noramly rushed. a development is.... ummmm... I think it is the making of the final art work... I don't know =,(

2. yes I have I think

brown = orange [miss calls it 'warm yellow'] and black
gold = yellow and black I think may of been orange not yellow
green = yellow and blue
purple = 'warm' red and 'warm' blue
dark red = red and black

3. ok the process of painting. first, you grab your pencil... ok ok I'm not doing that. first draw your final design. then under paint it. that is painting the whole thing in yellow or blue. yellow for warmer colours and blue for cooler colours. then paint the final colour on top. whoa you are done. yay! if you need/ want to you can go over the lines in a pen to show out lines.

Yay we did it now back to painting for me.
see ya

Abomination poems

this is another crate task. this one was I had to make some poems for abomination. here they are

Dark cold empty damp

Lonely quiet boring trapped

Unloved captive scared

Alone
Boy
Obsolete to others
Mary’s mistake
In a cage
Not real
A little kid
Turned into a monster
In a living hell
Oblivious to outside life
Not okay

Distillation experiment

This is for an experiment I am doing on separating coke

 Aim:separate the solute from the solvent in coke
Hypothesis: I think that the liquid will evaporate into the tubing and then condense back into the test tube leaving the solids (solute) will be left
Equipment: coke, conical flask, heatproof mat, delivery tube and bung, bunsen burner, tripod, gauze mat, retort stand, boss head and clamp boiling tube
Method: place some coke into the conical flask, place the bung into the top of the flask. place the whole thing on to the gauze mat on top of the tripod. put ice into a beaker and stick a test tube into the ice. place the other end of the bung tube into the test tube. put the bunsen burner under the tripod. light the bunsen burner. wait for the coke to boil. record your results
Results: the liquid evaporated into steam and traveled into to the delivery tube, it turned back into a liquid and dripped into the test tube, leaving a black sludge of the sugar and any other solids in the coke. with the normal coke it left more sugar and sludge than the coke zero and sugar free coke.
Conclusion: my hypothesis was correct because I thought the liquid would evaporate into the tubing and then condense back into the test tube leaving the solute will be left. 
Discussion: the heat from the bunsen burner heated up the coke until it boiled and evaporated then the coolness of the tubing cooled down the steam till it turned back into a liquid. 
Evaluation: My experiment was successful because the liquids were able to go from one point to another. A little steam did escape so I would put another bung in the test tube so the steam can't escape next time 

apology letter [to martha]

this is another create task this time I had to write a apology letter to martha as one of her classmates here is it

Dear Martha

I’m sorry I chased you. I am sorry I made you feel lonely.
I’m sorry I called you raggedy anne. I did it cos I wanted to be popular. I didn’t what to turn into you.
I only wanted to fit in. I’m sorry it got this far. I’m sorry that you had to cry yourself to sleep every night.
I wish I could take it all back. I wish you could have the same experiences as us. I’m sorry you have the
world's most strictest parents. I wish you could feel comfortable talking to us. If you will, I ask for your
forgiveness, I ask for another try, I ask to be friends. I’m sorry for what I have done. Please forgive
me. Please help me to be kinder to you. I am sorry.

Please forgive me

A very sorry classmate

Songs for Martha and Scott-Abomination

in english we are doing novel study and we have to do create task. here is my one,
this is 5 songs for martha