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Showing posts with label poems. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poems. Show all posts

Monday, 20 September 2021

Sad Joke on a Marae by Apirana Taylor analising questions.

In English, we are practicing for the  Unfamiliar Text exam. in the unfamiliar text exam you are given 3 pieces of text you have never seen and are asked questions on them. This is one of the examples we have been given to practice on.


Sad Joke on a Marae
Apirana Taylor

Tihei Mauriora I called
Kupe Paikea Te Kooti
Rewi and Te Rauparaha.
I saw them
grim death and wooden ghosts
carved on the meeting house wall.

In the only Māori I knew
I called
Tihei Mauriora.
Above me the tekoteko raged.
He ripped his tongue from his mouth
and threw it at my feet.

Then I spoke,
My name is Tū the freezing worker.
Ngāti D. B. is my tribe.
The pub is my Marae.
My fist is my taiaha.
Jail is my home.

Tihei Mauriora I cried.
They understood
the tekoteko and the ghosts
though I said nothing but
Tihei Mauriora
for that’s all I knew.

These are the questions we have to answer 
  • What senses does the poet mainly appeal to? The poem mainly appeals to the sense of sight and hearing. It gives the readers/listeners an image of a Maori standing in front of a Marae and shouting at the tekoteko and his ancestors 
  • Which images are most powerful or striking? the tekoteko throwing his tongue at Tu. This is because it sought of like the tekoteko is giving Tu the ability to speak Maori. 
  • Which sounds are particularly memorable? The calling of Tihei Mauriora
  • Which words do you find most striking / vivid / disturbing / moving? propbaly when the tekoteko throws their tongue at Tu
  • What are your first impressions of the speaker of the poem (if there is one)? He is a stereotypical Maori, being drunk. I also see him as almost a small man, trying to keep his belief going, but doesn't know how, but is trying his best 
  1. Why do you think Māori language is used in this poem? to show that Tu knows more Maori than he thinks he does
  2. Is this a rhyming poem, or a free verse poem? Why do you think that is? it is a free verse poem. Free verse poems are easier to write if you don't know the language as well, so it shows Tu's lack of knowledge 
  3. Who are: "Kupe Paikea Te KootiRewi and Te Rauparaha”? they are important Maori historical figures 
  4. In the third stanza, the poem uses a pepeha style. What is a pepeha, and why would it be important in this poem? A pepeha is a Mihi which is basically a Maori all about me and it tells us that he knows more than he thinks he knows. 
  5. Find examples of the following techniques and explain why they have been included:
    1. metaphor - My fist is my taiaha. It tells us he is a fighter and strong
    2. personification - The tekoteko ragged. It shows us that the ancestors are mad at Tu for losing his heritage. 
    3. strong verbs - The teketeko ragged. It shows just how mad the tekoteko is. 
    4. first-person pronoun
    5. repetition

Monday, 17 February 2020

Slam poetry

In english we have to to a Creative writing matrix. One of the thingys we have to do is slam poetry. We had to listen to three, and pick our favorite.

I'm at a tie with this one

  

and this one

  

I like the first one because, it is funny and its gay. I like the second one because it is funny and it is well presented. 

I have to write two thoughtful opinions for the poetry, and support with specific evidence (quotes) from the text (at least 2) in my discussion. Hmmm............. I have no idea what to write. I liked them? I'm sorry, I can't think of anything else to say.

Sorry.

Wednesday, 3 April 2019

Abomination poems

this is another crate task. this one was I had to make some poems for abomination. here they are

Dark cold empty damp
Lonely quiet boring trapped
Unloved captive scared

Alone
Boy
Obsolete to others
Mary’s mistake
In a cage
Not real
A little kid
Turned into a monster
In a living hell
Oblivious to outside life
Not okay


Wednesday, 14 November 2018

Poems

we had to write acrostic poems in P5 today. I did 3 and a bit all about the 4 sander sides, logan, patton, roman, and virgil.
here they are
Patton Sanders
A cookie addict
The mind and heart
The dad and the child
One cuddle is not enough
Nice kind caring person


Logan Sanders
Overly allergic to all emotions
Good at avoiding feelings
A emotionless nerd brain
Never not serious


Roman Sanders
Overly dramatic
Must kill dragon witch
A prince at heart
Never without a sword


Virgil Sanders
Isolation is key
Right most of the time
Good heart
"I will stop Roman from being punched"

Level 100 anxiety



Virgil in his den
Patton with his ten cookies
Logan with a book


Roman with the witch
Remy with his two starbucks
Picani/cartoons


Picani Sanders
Is a cartoon lover
Cartoons for life!  
A
N
I
Remy sanders
Extremely tired
Must have starbucks
Yeet the snake


Deceit sanders
E
Cover logan’s mouth
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