we then went to the workshop and made it . this took 2-3 lessons.
this is mine
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I had a triangle gnomon (thing in the middle) but it did not work out so I changed it to have a pole
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hi i'm Daniel Zacks friend fantastic work i cant really see something wrong.
ReplyDeleteHi Daniel
DeleteThanks for commenting. maybe you could use punctuation to make it easier to read.
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Michaela
Hi Michaela i'm Jesse I like how you found out that a candle can tell the time to and maybe make the words bigger.
ReplyDeleteHello Jesse
DeleteThanks for commenting. the way to tell time using candles is quite interesting isen't it? I will see what I can do about the word size.
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Michaela
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DeleteHi, Michaela! It's Summer.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your post, though, there are a few grammatical errors inside the post and it looks a bit bright in a few parts of it. I liked the video, too, but the camera just seemed a little too shaky and all over the place.
Hi summer!
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting sorry it's been so long on the reply. ya sorry about the camera if you listen I'm slightly annoyed but trying to keep it light hearted =) I will see what I can do about the grammar
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Michaela