Here is a story about a barbeque.
Tuesday 30 May 2017
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I am very impressed by your bbq timeline it is very well done.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could put adjectives in the writing to make it more juicy. You are very well at blogging keep it up.
thank you Desharn
DeleteI know its not the best but is what we had to do which was to copy it out of the book. also its only for leave 1 readers
Hi Michaela, I liked reading your timeline of the barbecue. I liked the part where the salad was made because there was lots of colours in it. Maybe next time you could do a reflection on how you felt at the end and what you could do next time. Overall you did a good job. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeletethanks Genica
DeleteI know its a bit simple though that's how we were told to do it
Hi Michaela,
ReplyDeleteI like your post even though it doesn't have much on it, it is very creative. It reminds me of a post I did like this, only the book was easier to read. Also are you sure you are allowed to use those pictures?
From Thomas
Dont worry Thomas they are ok to use
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